Monday, April 29, 2013

Revise Short Essay and Extend Essay


Short Essay1
The Significance of Hot Pot in My Life
       When I was in junior high school, I remember my Chinese teacher used to explain, “Life is a dish.” Sour, sweet, bitter, and spicy, all of these flavors constitute the appearance of life. I have always believed that this is a vivid metaphor about life. However, more specifically, I would like to explain how my life looks like a hot pot.
A pot of hot water is tasteless and bland and you can decide whatever ingredients you like. Hot pot can be complex and appetizing with fish, meats, and vegetables or it can also be simple with the real taste of a cooking material. It just depends on what you like. I used to look for hot pot sauce in every Asian supermarket when I first came to United States. Afterwards, I invited my friends to come to my home, regardless of nationalities. I prepared hot pot, asking all friends to sit around the table with steam coming from it and to share the grand one-pot meals. Some friends said they know Chinese love to eat hot pot, but I am the one who loves to eat hot pot the most. Some friends said I make the hot pot delicious and they asked me to prepare more ingredients next time.
However, they did not know how much time and effort I spend in order to modulate the best soup of the hot pot. How to stir up fresh shrimp with smooth egg sauce patiently; the best proportion of tomatoes, jujubes, gingers, and garlics in the soup is 5:4:3:2. The next step after vegetables is fish and tofu instead of meat and crab so as to make sure the soup can be guaranteed delicious; cooking time can take from 20 seconds to 15 minutes, depending on the type of food. You may not imagine that a simple hot pot needs to consider so many things. However, I learnt all of these secrets about cooking from my mom. My mom always asks me to select the ingredients, no matter what I choose to add in the soup, she tells me I must take them seriously and passionately. Like my life, my family always gives me the maximum freedom and support to do what I want. I put different flavors in the hot pot as I choose to experience different events in my life.
Back to 10 years ago, I always yelled to eat out after school and when I was ordering, my mom always said she could do the same dishes at home. She was most reluctant to eat hot pot in the restaurant. My family has two types of people who love food. The first type is my father and my aunt. They are able to evaluate the quality of food, but they are not willing to cook in the kitchen. The second type is my mom and I. We not only eat food but also are passionate about cooking. Every time my dad goes to buy lamb to prepare hot pot, my mom can tell the level of fresh directly. If the lamb were not very freshness, my mom would not cook and eat. Her stringent requirements of food trained my nose and tongue. During this spring break, I went to Flushing, New York City. In Flushing’s Chinatown, my nose smelt the good sesame butter, chive flower paste, and pickled tofu far away from the shelf. I bought three bottles and spent more than 20 USD shipping fee to go back to Denver. To me, delicious hot pot condiments can provide me the great energy to keep studying at night and to relieve homesickness. To enjoy a cuisine is a good reward for my hard work.
 I used to think my mom’s requirements about food must associate with her profession. Even though she deals with work strictly, she knows how to enjoy life during free time. I inherited her strengths. I insist the pot must be made of ceramic just like I must use the finest components to complete my professional project. I love different flavors of hot pot, such as spicy soup, clear soup, and tomato’s soup flavor. Just like I enjoy experiencing different culture shock. I learn French; I visit different countries; I decide to study abroad in Hong Kong. However, I did not know that the way my mom taught me to cook hot pot embodies her love for me. I even did not realize the moment whenever we sat around and ate hot pot together was the great happiness in my life until I had the first Spring Festival in the United States.
Indeed, a grand hot pot also means friendship and acceptance. An important sign of Chinese people when they want to get familiar with you is to share a chair for you at dinner. For instance, if you look for a seat with a tray in a cafeteria but not a single Chinese person greets you or if you see a photo of a group of people around the hot pot on Facebook and find you have not been invited. It means, sorry, you are not in this network. Last year in Spring Festival, I had to prepare for two midterm exams and I did not know a lot of Chinese people in Denver. I felt lonely until an acquaintance invited me to eat hot pot at his dorm. A meal of hot pot always takes two hours or more, it means you have a lot time to chat with others at the same table. Hot pot is different from other dishes, sharing a hot pot is the best way to get familiar with other people. I became acquainted with my best friend in Denver during the time we waited for our hot pot food.
To conclude, many people believe that the hot pot is very simple and easy; however, the choice of ingredients and the preparation of seasoning ask me to maintain a positive and optimistic life attitude. The flavor of hot pot helps me to reduce pressure and homesickness. More importantly, sharing hot pot help me know more friends. The significance of hot pot is a microcosm to display the significance that food has in my life. There are a lot of proverbs about food in China. The most common one translated in English is that food is the paramount necessity of people. I have always believed that one’s passion for cuisine is the best way to display one’s positive attitude towards life.

Extend Essay1
The Cultural Metaphors of Food
       Food is the engine of metaphorical meanings that spread throughout people’s lives regardless of region and ethnicity. We associate tomatoes with sin; olives can draw an equal sign with peace; and noodles implicitly refer to longevity. Indeed, food can be seen as a metaphor of religion, gender, family, local and national identity, and even social hierarchy (Lévi-Strauss, 489). We should not underestimate the significance of cultural metaphors of food due to the reason that they not only guide people’s food choices, but also change people’s diet experiences. According to Lakoff and Johnson, “the essence of metaphor is understanding and experiencing one kind of thing in terms of another” (125). It means that metaphors are not only a form of language, but also a style of human’s perception. The linguistic expressions of food and eating, and whether foods are used for creating metaphors or becoming the target of metaphors, are reflecting cultures (Lakoff &Johnson 126). In this essay, I will analyze how food metaphors have influenced the way we eat today.
        We first consider how belief influences people’s food choices. Foods are inextricably linked to religion, even in the context of a crisis of faith. The metaphors of food in different religions often refer to purity, self-discipline, and sacrifice. For instance, Kashruth, the diet rules of the Jewish people, strictly distinguishes between dairy products and meats. It prohibits followers to eat pork, shellfish, reptiles, and amphibians. Based on the study of Mary Douglass, changes in diet are a prerequisite to observe and adapt the orders of the natural world to the Jews (7). The food metaphors in the Jewish faith are obedience and order. The other example of food as a metaphor for religion is that some Muslims do not eat pork because the Holy Quran points out that pork is an unclean food, which is contrary to mental purity. Moreover, food implicitly refers to physical, mental, and spiritual balance in the Hindu belief system. From bean soup, vegetarian dishes, meat, and fish, to golden flowers, there are more than 20 types of sauce that curry powder consists of. The religious metaphors of food influences people’s food choices through indicating what kinds of ingredients can be used and what kinds of foods should be neglected in people’s daily life.
       Similarly, when we consider food as a metaphor for gender, we see a great contrast between men and women upon their food choices. For instance, Korthals mentions the words of the song “Sugar, Sugar,” in his journal article, Food as a Source and Target of Metaphors: Inclusion and Exclusion of Foodstuffs and Persons through Metaphors, to explain the gender metaphor of food.
              Sugar, ah honey honey
              You are my candy girl
              And you’ve got me wanting you.
Korthals states that “sugar” is linked to girl whereas “beefy” is associated with boy in the United States (81). There are also other sayings like “real men don’t eat quiche,” “the man bring home the bacon,” and “the man is meat and potato.” In contrast to women’s tendency to eat more sweets, men become more likely to eat meats and reject quiche. The gender metaphors of food influence people through building different taste preferences. In the choice of some food, people will become careful due to the gender description in sayings or lyrics.
When our eyes transfer away from the trans-national religious belief and gender difference to a specific country or region, it is interesting to notice food can be seen as a metaphor of a group identity. According to O’Donnell’s article, The Cultural Politics of Eating in Shenzhen, food can be used to differentiate people within regions and generations in China. For instance, the southern and the northern parts of China show very different eating habits. People in southern areas like to eat rice, whereas people in northern areas prefer to eat noodles. When the lens focuses on Shenzhen, the story of Zhang Tao and his mother is a good example, indicating food as a metaphor of group identity. The old Shenzhener, Zhang Tao’s mother, always liked to eat food she used to eat during tough time, whereas Zhang Tao, the new Shenzhener choose to try different cuisines from all over the world. To most old Shenzheners, food embodies the meaning of nostalgia. Even though the elderly and the youth are living in the same community, food becomes a sign to differentiate their generations, or the time of growing up. Food is an obvious label to define different regions and generations in China. Food, thus, becomes a metaphor to show cultural resistance.
Just like the British refer to themselves as “beef-eaters” whereas the Japanese call themselves as “rice-eaters.” Americans use “the cream of the crop” to describe talented people and “wake up and smell the coffee” to cheer people up. People use food to define themselves and differentiate between others, proving that food is a metaphor of group identity. In this case, food metaphors decide what we eat the most. Indeed, the story of Zhang Tao and his mother causes me to recall my own experience with hot pot. To me, the hot pot is the metaphor of family, love, and friendship solidarity. A pot of hot water is tasteless and bland, thus you can decide whatever ingredients you like to add. My mom used to ask me to select the ingredients, to keep in mind that no matter what I choose, I must take them seriously and passionately. It would be a pleasure to try different flavors of hot pot, such as spicy soup, clear soup, mushroom soup, and tomato’s soup. I firmly believe that to put different flavors in the hot pot is an epitome, as I study abroad, experiencing cultural shock. I also insist the grand pot must be made of ceramic, like one must use the finest components to complete art projects.
However, I did not know that the way my mom taught me to cook hot pot embodied her love for me. I even did not realize that whenever we sat around and ate hot pot together was the great happiness in my life until I had the first Spring Festival in the United States. I had to prepare for two midterm exams and did not know a lot of Chinese people in Denver. I felt lonely until an acquaintance invited me to eat hot pot at his dorm. Indeed, a grand hot pot also means friendship and acceptance. I became acquainted with one of my best friend in Denver during the time we waited for our food. The metaphor of hot pot has enriched my life experience and the pleasure of eating hot pot becomes a metaphor for family and friendship in my mind. Once I wanted to eat my mom’s cuisine and buy all materials I needed. She taught me how to cook step by step on Skype, but it was still missing some flavors. I realize what I lost was the taste of home. We always link homely dishes to homesickness and link chocolate to lovers. The food metaphor can create an emotional bond towards family and friendship, making us fall in love with a specific food taste.
However, it is hard to expose that what you eat at home and what you eat with your friends symbolizes your class and status. It is true that life is an entity of all sides of food. Sour, sweet, bitter, and spicy flavors constitute the real taste of life and even society. Eating foie gras and drinking champagne are luxury food associated with the upper classes in America and Europe. However, the caste system in India determines that pariahs cannot eat the same meal as the higher Hindu caste (Guru 9). Freedman and Jurafsky make a more in-depth research on a specific food in their journal article, “Authenticity in America: Class Distinctions in Potato Chip Advertising.” They compare nine brands of potato chips and reached the conclusion that food packing and food advertising reflect different consumer insights in terms of education, health, user experience, and consumption levels (5-10). For instance, they analyze the linguistic complexity of inexpensive chips is about eighth grad level, whereas expensive chips is about tenth to eleventh grade level. The analysis shows that expensive chips always use more complex and longer words in their packaging than inexpensive chips. Expensive chips always highlight health in their packaging, in contrast to the less complex language used in inexpensive chip advertising (Freedman & Jurafsky 4).
In comparison, chocolate advertising, such as M&M’s, Ferrero Rocher, and Godiva, shows the same methodology of metaphors towards social hierarchy. In M&M’s 2013 commercial “Love Ballad,” the Red chocolate candy is frustrated to play the piano and tell stories about his unrequited love. “He” would like to do all things for her but “he” could not accept that she only sees him as a chocolate candy. In this commercial, chocolate candy has been given an independent personality, such as angry, sad, and happy. M&M’s is not only your snack, but also your playmate. If everyone can buy M&M’s as a playmate, Ferrero Rocher is a good choice for the middle class to entertain friends at party in order to celebrate golden moment. The advertising of Ferrero Rocher tells people that they are the best status symbol to entertain friends. In contrast, as a representative of luxury chocolates, Godiva targets directly to the middle class and the upper class population in their advertising. Their commercial, “Godiva Chocolatier One Minute Commercial,” showed in 2010 New York Film Academy shows that luxury chocolate is the best love-letter in more than middle class. To conclude, food choices symbolize people’s social hierarchy and eating quality.
A Chinese Philosopher Lao Tzu once said in Tao Te Ching, "Governing a great nation is much like cooking a small fish"(para.60). It means that governing a country required the right "seasonings" and adjustments for successful results. This metaphor clearly illustrates the significance of food in Chinese culture. I have been thinking about what role food has played in people’s life and in different culture, whether important or casually. The essay focuses on the cultural metaphors of food, in terms of religion, gender, family, local and national identity, and social hierarchy. These terms help us to define what we eat and what we should not eat, which tastes we prefer and that foods create special emotional appeal, and they even determine people’s food habit and quality. More importantly, a common point we should not ignore is that culture guides people’s choice of food, and what we choose to eat defines who we are.

















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