Many college students spend their morning
like this: after their alarm clocks wake them up, they always struggle for ten
or twenty minutes; they rub their tired and sleepy eyes, getting up out of
their bed. Because every second counts, some students rush out of their
dormitory without breakfast. The other students, who remind themselves to eat
“breakfast”, always open their empty refrigerator and then close it, getting
into the crowd of college.The study of Krisha Thiagaraja and Mohammad R.Torabi indicate
that about 37.2% of young people between 19 and 29 years of age seldom eat
breakfast. Most of them said the main reasons for not eating breakfast was they
do not have enough time (64%) and the other said they did not feel hungry in
the morning (30.3%) (9). Do you remember how long you have not eaten breakfast
so far?
It is widely accepted that breakfast is the
most important meal of the day, especially during growth. Regular breakfast
eating is a crucial indicator to a healthy lifestyle and health physical and
mental status, because it provides people the daily supply of nutrients. Irregular
breakfast eating or always skipping breakfast is always associated with being
overweight, the low frequency of health promoting behavior, and even high
possibility of cardiometabolic risk in a longitudinal study. Thus, whether
students or office workers, to get up early every day for 15 minutes and to enjoy
a good breakfast should be one of the “required courses” in the daily life. To
encourage students and staff eating breakfast regularly should be considered as
a significant health promotion strategy in university campus.
In their study, irregular breakfast eating
and health status among adolescents in Taiwan, Rea-Jeng, Edward K Wang,
Yeu-Sheng Hsieh and Mei-Yen Chen investigate 1609 adolescents and get a
conclusion that irregular breakfast eating is connected to being overweight.
Among the total participant students, “28.8% were overweight and nearly one
quarter (23.6%) reported eating breakfast irregularly during schooldays” (7). Skipping
breakfast is frequent for students during schooldays and they often eat high
calorie and unhealthy snacks during break. Comparing the overweight rate
between students who have regular breakfast eating and those who have irregular
breakfast eating (OR for IRBE VS. RBE=1.51), there finding shows that students with
regular breakfast eating had a lower risk of overweight due to the less snacks
eating between meals.
Many studies show that skipping breakfast
is widespread happening among college students, which is also an indicator for health
promoting behavior. Krisha Thiagarajah and Mohammad R. Torabi did a study about
the Irregular Breakfast Eating and Associated Health Behaviors in 2009. They investigated
1,257 college students in a Midwestern university in the U.S.A, and found
nearly one-fifth of them stated that they never eating breakfast (4). Comparing
to regular breakfast eaters, their logical analysis indicate that students who
always skip breakfast are more likely to sleep 5.5 hours or less. “Sleep
deprivation would have caused them to be tired the net morning and, thus, lead
to skipping breakfast” (5). Not only that, breakfast skippers are less likely
to work out in contrast to those non-skippers, since eating breakfast can
improve the energy intake to do extra physical activities. Moreover, students
who always skip breakfast have a high consumption of soda and other sugared
beverages. Similar to some breakfast skippers will nibble snakes between meals,
some others have to compensate their calories from the non-nutritive beverages
(9). Eating breakfast, thus, is associated with health behavior.
If the potential
possibility of obesity and the short-term unhealthy lifestyle cannot catch your
attention due to your academic pressure, a longitudinal study about the
relationship between cardiometabolic risk and skipping breakfast have to get
your attention. Kylie J Smith, Seana L Gall, Sarah A McNaughton, Leigh
Blizzard, Terence Dwyer, and Alison J Venn conclude that to promote breakfast
eating is an important public health message on account of the cardiometabolic
health (1). They found that people who skipped breakfast in adulthood but not
in childhood are similar to those who skipped breakfast at both time. For
instance, they all have higher fasting insulin and LDL cholesterol
concentrations, which are contributors to detrimental effects on
cardiometabolic health, than non-breakfast skippers. There study shows that
eating breakfast is a persistent work in your daily life. The cardiometabolic
rick will directly influence your diet quality in the future.
Among the three studies,
the key solution to promote college students to eat breakfast is to propose a
healthy lifestyle among youth. Some scholars believe that college has the main
duty to influence students and families’ attitudes regarding healthy breakfast
and exercise. They could decrease breakfast skippers through provide quick and
nutrient food. However, the body is one’s own. Don’t forget you are the lead of
yourself. A good suggestion or always the first food you should eat for
breakfast is a cup of cereal with skim milk. For starters of breakfast eating,
a cup of cereal is quick, always less than five minutes to prepare, and
healthy, which has fiber to lower cholesterol. For girls who always worry about
their weight, skim milk also help you to lose weight.
Overall, to develop a
habit usually takes 21 days. Thus, why not try to set your alarm clock and to
get up early for 15 minutes from today in order to enjoy a nutrient breakfast?
Eating breakfast is a good beginning to develop a healthy lifestyle because
paying attention to your health is always the best investment in the youth
time.
Work Cited
Yang, Rea-Jeng, Edward K Wang, Yue-Sheng
Hsieh, and Mei-Yen Chen. “Irregular
breakfast
eating and health status among adolescens in Taiwan.” BMC Public
Health (Dec.2006):
6:295. Print.
Thiagarajah, Krisha, and Mohammad R.
Torabi. “Irregular Breakfast Eating and
Associated
Health Behaviors: A Pilot Study Among College Students.” The
Health Educator
(Spring.2009): vol.41, No.1. Print.
Smith, Kylie J, Seana L Gall, Sarah A
McNaughton, Leigh Blizzard, Terence Dwyer,
and Alison J
Venn. “Skipping breakfast: longitudinal associations with
cardiometabolic
risk factors in the Childhood Determinants of Adult Health
Study.” AJCN
(Oct.2010). Print.
1) What food or eating practice is the author researching, and what are the reported health implications
ReplyDeleteThe Author is researching the implications of skipping breakfast on a daily basis. Some of the implications mentioned in the essay where that if we skip breakfast we impair our ability towards a healthy lifestyle and our health physical and mental status are not as strong because , because we lack the daily supplies of nutrients.
2) In what ways is the scientific study re written for a broader audience?
What rhetorical and language choices are evident
The author does a good job in rewriting the studies for a broader audience. It was a lot of percentages and facts about what happens when we skip breakfast, rather then let the reader become bored of reading the facts, she does a good job of using the statistic and talks about what it means to the point that you begin to question if it is really worth it to skip breakfast or not. The author also uses a less formal way of writing to suit the appropriate audience. Instead of just giving the implications and facts she does gives tips for healthy eating and keeps it a little personal.
3) Suggestions for revision
Maybe just talk about if you skip breakfast or not, and if you do maybe discuss how after doing this research if it has impacted your actions. Overall good essay though !
Cen researched the importance of breakfast in regards to health. Interestingly, I also researched this topic. She states that those who skip breakfast are often at risk of becoming obese, and having a lack of essential nutrients. She integrates the longitudinal essay well, explaining that that means it is over time as opposed to a comparison of other people.
ReplyDeleteI think that overall, this is well done, but the conclusion could have more at the end and could pose a question or wrap up the rest of the essay more to give more substance to the conclusion